As you watch the sun set into the Pacific
from your picnic blanket on the rocky shore,
head resting on a driftwood log,
the sky becomes a spectrum.
Bright pink around the sun's edge,
dark blue above the tree line.
People point at features you cannot see.
Their confidence makes you look anyway.
They see something up there for themselves,
something that grounds them— a tether.
Some point toward pink, some blue, some in between.
You keep looking, but it’s all opaque.
He/they. I teach English at a junior high school in western Washington. Outside of work, I worry about a myriad of things and spend time outside.
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I’m interpreting this poem as referring to gender: pink for girls, blue for boys, spaces between, etc. And I definitely relate to it all personally looking opaque 😅
Nice poem, I liked the strong imagery.
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Thank you so much!!
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I’m interpreting this poem as referring to gender: pink for girls, blue for boys, spaces between, etc. And I definitely relate to it all personally looking opaque 😅
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That’s what I was going for! The whole thing feels murkier all the time.
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big oof for figuring out gender 💀
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Truly!
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I love the experience of reading this poem and the rising imagery that fits into today’s world! ❤
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Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
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