shoes by the door walk on the balls of your feet like a cartoon burglar finish your morning coffee wash the mug in the sink before they wake up leave everything where you find it no trace of your existence fade into the background so no one misses you when you’re gone sit at the dinner table quiet as snowfall in twilight it’s your house but it doesn’t feel that way
Isn’t that how we all feel sometimes? Having to tiptoe around people around subjects for fear of flare ups ? Nice poem thank you for sharing
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Thank you so much! I’m happy it resonated with you!
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It did it’s a bit like writing and posting too don’t you think?
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I hadn’t thought about it, but I think you’re right. Like, you’re curating an image/post that will please an audience, but not challenge/disrupt TOO much, or else they may turn on you. I definitely tend to think about the audience perception line-by-line and need to get out of it when I’m writing. That seem about right?
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Yes definitely
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Write for yourself and if other people like it that’s a welcome bonus. Ever heard the term “dance like nobody is watching”? The same applies to writing write like only you will read it. If you like it guaranteed someone else will too. I was scared to post to start with but then I thought what have I got to lose
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You’re totally right! I was the same when I started posting stuff. I knew I had to get used to sharing what I could and be proud of creating a thing. I end up writing for myself when in I get in the groove, but it can take me a but to get into it some days.
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Yeah me too a prompt or a word or phrase can set me off or a picture .
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Same! I use a Word of the Day online as a prompt to get me to write something each day to get into the rhythm.
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Would you like a prompt for tomorrow?
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Absolutely!
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The girl was unkempt ragged .but that wasn’t what caught my eye. It was that smile….
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Thanks! I’ll see where I can go with that! It’s a great opener!!
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no it doesn’t!
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I feel this one…💙
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I’m glad this resonated with you!!
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